Subject: Re: [FFML] [Ranma][Fic] Soul of Ice: Synthesis-- Success
From: Bobby
Date: 4/21/1999, 5:54 AM
To: Matthew Lewis
CC: ffml@fanfic.com


                    Soul of Ice: Synthesis-- Success

Hurray! I was hoping that you would write this one. I thought this was 
a great Soul of Ice chapter. I really like your particular writing 
style. Viewing the events from all the different characters eyes was a
nice touch.

That rippling and internal body changes were _very_ interesting. I 
nearly expected him to grow wings or something by the end. More details
in the final edition would be appriciated. 

One gripe though... I think you should of had more information on
Ranma's
new style. If not the techniques then maybe the philosophies behind it.
Your 'fic only gives us vague impression of it. (His thoughts about
timing don't really count). 

In my opinion,

Bobby
My Shrine to Kasumi Tendo
http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Field/6390/