In a message dated 4/17/99 12:19:59 AM Pacific Daylight Time,
christopher_kelly@hmc.edu writes:
Wow. That was really good. I still wasn't entirely sure whether or not
Kuno was insane or not until Ranma actually revealed himself. You put a
unique spin on the situation. It has been done that Ranma WAS actually an
evil sorcerer, but that was an alternafic, not what what you did, which was
what would actually happen if Kuno was right. Ranma keeping everyone in
the
dark was the perfect idea.
I think the best part was the ending, that Kuno didn't pull off a
herioc
ending, but instead when facing a dark sorceror of such magnitude, faced
death as a samurai. And the rest of the world lives on thinking of what it
would be like to live life as deluded as Kuno . . . .
Very well done, and an enjoyable read.
Oh, and I forgive you for taking time off from Mayumi Academy, if you
are going to make things like this!
chris
I know your not supposed to quote the whole text of a post just to add "Me
too" to the bottom of it. However, Chris does a perfect job of saying
exactly what I wanted to say, leaving me with nothing TOO add to this
commentary on a very well thought out and exectuted what if idea but "ME TOO."
And that includes forgiving you for taking time off of working on MA to write
this. I promise I'll get the time to sent you some C&C on the first 4
chapters... someday.