Subject: Re: [FFML] [EVA/HPL] Children of an Elder God (part 7)
From: "Derek Sherman" <doppleganger@pipeline.com>
Date: 4/17/1999, 2:01 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com
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doppleganger@pipeline.com

Excellent addition to an already excellent series. There is one thing 
that kinda jumped out at me, tho. Namely, the following passage :

 I got a letter from Anna!  Is she really going to be
tested to be a pilot?  That would be really great if she got
to come live with us.  Well, live here in Tokyo-3.  Fraulein
Katsuragi's apartment is pretty much full.  And it may get
more that way soon. 

Now, perhaps I'm misremembering (don't have access to my fanfiction 
archives at the moment), but didn't Asuka reveal during her argument 
with Gendo that she knew that most peoplewho test to be pilots wound up 
insane, or worse? Knowing that, would she actually be *happy* for her 
"sister" to be tested, running the same risk?

Aside from that, excellent. Keep up the good work. Of course, now I 
have to wait for the next chapter.... oh well.   ^_^


Derek