Any other C&C is welcome, especially on the discussion between Kuno
and
Ranma.
I liked it. As I have stated before, Kuno is one of my favorite
characters, and I was starting to get worried that he'd continue to
suffer in this fic as he had in the preceding parts. I don't think
this discussion was all that unrealistic. I'm one of those people who
believe that Kuno is an intelligent person. Delusional, yes. Somewhat
impulsive, again, yes. Stupid is where I have the problem. The
discussion he had with Ranma here is the first time I believe anyone
sat down with Kuno and really explained the whole curse thing to him.
Kuno wasn't as angry with Ranma as he should've been, IMO, but it's
your perogative as writer. Great stuff, all in all. I look forward to
the next part.
If my sanity asks, I was never here.
Kurt Markuson
"Today, love is even more painful than customary."
-Tatewaki Kuno
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