On Wed, 14 Apr 1999, Bogue wrote:

-----Original Message-----
From: Mike Loader <mike@thekeep.org>
Subject: [FFML] [Fanfic][R1/2] Last One Standing - Prologue & Canto 1

C&C is, as always, welcomed and desired.

So it is asked and so it shall be done.
Now, this fic confused me. I felt very much that it had the
potential to be a lame-o Ranma fic just with Akane and
Ranma's roles reversed and some evil presence coming
to kill them. And I was surprised. A lot more is put into
this then just another run of the mill Ranma fic and Anjin
is an interesting character.

Thanku. I tried to avoid the Annoying New Character features in building
her... we don't see much of the story from her viewpoint yet, which'll
change.

(For some reason I have the
unshaking feeling she's going to fall in love with one of the
other Ranma crew members.)

Possibly. :) I certainly won't rule it out.

The sunglasses thing seemed kinda silly and you
had Shampoo use Aiyah in the wrong context at one point I think. Well, I'll

Hmm, where?

look out for
the next part and hope we won't be left in the dark for too
long as to what's gonna happen.

Don't worry. Just 9 more cantos or so. Maybe less.

P.S. Mike, are you gonna do another mystery fic (e.g Ghost Story and Did She
Jump or Was She Pushed?) ?

My shortfics are usually concieved, written, and released in the space of
a day. Something'll give me an idea (a nightmare for ghost story, and the
namesake song for did she jump...) and I'll sit down at the keyboard and
hammer it out. Because of this, I honestly have no idea when I'll write
another one - it'll probably happen eventually.

Thanks for the comments.

Until I find better things to write about. Ja ne.