-----Original Message-----
From: Mike Loader <mike@thekeep.org>
To: ffml@fanfic.com <ffml@fanfic.com>
Date: Wednesday, April 14, 1999 6:31 PM
Subject: [FFML] [Fanfic][R1/2] Last One Standing - Prologue & Canto 1

C&C is, as always, welcomed and desired.

So it is asked and so it shall be done.
Now, this fic confused me. I felt very much that it had the
potential to be a lame-o Ranma fic just with Akane and
Ranma's roles reversed and some evil presence coming
to kill them. And I was surprised. A lot more is put into
this then just another run of the mill Ranma fic and Anjin
is an interesting character. (For some reason I have the
unshaking feeling she's going to fall in love with one of the
other Ranma crew members.) The sunglasses thing seemed kinda silly and you
had Shampoo use Aiyah in the wrong context at one point I think. Well, I'll
look out for
the next part and hope we won't be left in the dark for too
long as to what's gonna happen.

P.S. Mike, are you gonna do another mystery fic (e.g Ghost Story and Did She
Jump or Was She Pushed?) ?

Until I find better things to write about. Ja ne.