Warr wrote:

Hello there,

Hello again.

Well, it looks like we've finally reached the end of this epic sized

story.

One day I promise to add it all up and find out just how long it really
is.

It is nice to finally reach the end but I will miss reading new chapters.
What do we have up our sleeves now?  :)

Lots of things. Rewiting chapters 2-6 into prose. Revising the entire
series. Touching up two early 'Lost episodes' that were written out but
dumped due to lack of character development. But before that, the odds are
I'll be releasing a new and different series soon. I have 80% of it
written out on paper. I just have to transcribe it and finish up. Hope to
get it out by next week, but we'll see. There are a host of other ideas
too, but we'll see what I feel like writing. It all depends on how the
muse feels.

These comments have probably already been touched on by others
but on the off chance they have not:

"She's going to be Shampoo Saotome after today," Ranma informed her as

he

persuaded Shampoo to release him before she wrinkled his suit.

"I still think Ranma Pu has a better ring to it."

Does that make Shampoo - Shampoo Pu?

Heh.

"It's crap," Nabiki corrected. "It's not even cubic zirconium. How can

you

possibly feel satisfied with a piece of junk like this?"
"Ranma picked it out all by himself," Shampoo insisted as she shook her

Needs and extra line between paragraphs.

Most of the line problems seem to have originated with my mailer. Sorry
about those.

Needs and extra line between para's.  Oh, and:
Ranma prodded yet again, "What about egotistical?!"  Mwahahahaha

Heh. I tried fitting that in there again, but I couldn't seem to find a
place where it did not feel forced.

aren't going to sleep with him before the wedding, you can break him in

by

giving him blow-jOW!" Ai rubbed her side where Ukyou had elbowed her.

You were going to say blow-up doll, yes?  ;>

Of course. ^_^

"Didn't you know? Your name translates into 'Gelded Horse'."

LOL, original comment.  <G>

Thanks. Don't recall seeing that line before.

Extra line in there.

Cologne waved Shampoo-kun on

Shampoo-kun has a bit more mass than Shampoo, yes?  How is that dress
holding faring?

Oh, umm. Okay. It's made of unstable molecules. ^_^

It had just barely enough room to accomodate the additional mass.

That ending bit with sexually pent up Ranma was too funny. :)

Thanks again.

At this point,
Shampoo doesn't know that she had the kid with Kasumi, does she?

Nope. Even with all of the little hints people kept dropping.

Seemed
that Silk was considering telling her....

More like trying to probe Shampoo to see what her reaction to discovering
that little fact would be. Though Silk is not happy about having to remain
silent about it.

Wonderful series.  I'm sorry to see it end but I'm also looking forward

to

more stories from you.

Thanks. I am planning a (much shorter) sequal someday, but not in the near
future. I want to write other things for now. Lord know after writing the
same story for over a year and a half, I have plenty of ideas stored in my
head. Time to write some of them out.

Thanks for the C+C.

D.B. Sommer