Just something minor that I noticed. Again, great epilogue!
DB Sommer wrote:
"It's not like you two have the resources to do it on your own. Without me
you'd be lucky to make one quarter of what I could get you. Still, there's
no need to answer now. It was just an idea" Nabiki folded up the document
just an idea<, or .>" Nabiki *punctuation*
Ranma and Shampoo shrugged and let the matter rest. They were just about
to ask Kasumi something when a short, brown-haired girl approached them
girl approached them<.> *punctuation*