Subject: Re: [FFML] [Ranma][Fanfic] Eidolons - Two |
From: kleppe@execpc.com (Gary Kleppe) |
Date: 4/11/1999, 7:01 PM |
To: ffml@fanfic.com |
Not much to say here except well done. The story is interesting, Ranma's characterization is very believable, and the writing is excellent. Couldn't even spot any typos or places where I'd change the wording... though I did nearly break into song at the "light of the silvery moon" mention. Gary Kleppe http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics.html