When I read the first chapter of this, my
thoughts were along the lines of: "Hoboy, another
'Ranma goes to a mysterious land for adventure' story.
Sure the grammar is one of the best I have ever seen,
characters are really IC, and the descriptions are
really vivid, but it's not that great."

	Then I read the second chapter, and my thoughts
changed to this: "Goodness gracious! This is like a
beautiful dream and a nightmare! I have never read
a fanfic that drew me in like a moth to a flame and
never let go! It's just... artistic!"

	After finishing reading it, I REALLY want to
see more than just three chapters! All I can say is
WRITE MORE!!!
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