Repeat victim ! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA !
Sorry forgot the BWA !
<snip>
Anyway, it is a great improvement over the earlier version. I see
that you finally decided to introduce the Tenchi cast first.
Anyway, keep up the good work !
BTW, I loved how Hikaru and Gos met. From aerolbj@epic.net Sun Apr 11 05:49:52 1999
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Subject: RE: [FFML] [Fanfic][Ranma][REVISED]A Stained Glass Mind [1/?]
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Victim # 15 !!!!!
BWAHAHAHAHAHA !
A Stained Glass Mind
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By: Anand Rao
[Elsa Bibat]
Wooohoooo !!!!! I get to read this thing again !
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Notes:
So, why a rewrite of something I wrote back in October of '97?
Well, a few months back, I discovered, (much to my embarrassment,) that
people still read this thing. So I decided to take a look at it and cringed
at what I saw. The grammar was horrible, the story was a poor mix of prose
and script, there were several gaping plot holes, the characters were hardly
IC, and the ending, quite frankly, sucked.
[Elsa Bibat]
Well, since I was still in lurking mode then, I wasn't able to give any comment.
But I found it good enough even with the bad parts. That's my judge of a good
story even if it's supposed to suck, you can't help but enjoy it.
Good enough reasons, I suppose. So sit back, relax, (and hopefully,) enjoy.
Thanks to Sean Gaffney for prodding me and Donny Cheng for prereading.
Any and all C&C accepted, (and desired, really.) Even if you flamed me the
first time around, feel free to do so again.
[Elsa Bibat]
Anyway, it is a great improvement over the earlier version. I've read some of the
C&C posted for this and I agree with most of them. Anyway keep up the good
work !