Subject: [FFML][Shortfic][Teaser?] Rain
From: "Brian Payne" <sofaspud@ior.com>
Date: 4/10/1999, 6:57 PM
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Author notes follow.


Rain -----------

    Ranma hunched his shoulders dejectedly as he walked slowly down the 
street.  The gray skies above rumbled warningly, but he didn't care.  
Akane was gone.  And she wasn't coming back.
    It's all my fault, he thought miserably.  I could've been nicer or 
something, but no - I have to go and act like a jerk again!
    The skies rumbled again, and Ranma felt the first few warning 
droplets.  They weren't enough to trigger the change, but they were a 
precursor of things to come.
    Screw it, he thought.  I don't care.
    He kept walking, passing by closed shops and rundown buildings.  
His hands were buried in the pockets of the unfamiliar American jeans 
he was wearing, and the leather jacket Akane had pressed on him clung 
to his shoulders, reminding him of days past.

    "Look, Ranma!" Akane said.  "It fits you perfectly!"
    Ranma glanced at himself in the mirror, and saw that she was right.  
The black leather jacket hung from his shoulders in a fashion that he 
was decidedly unused to, but it looked _good_.
    "Are you two going to shop all day?" came a droll voice from behind 
him.  Ranma turned around, and was startled to note a surprised - and 
appreciative - look in Nabiki's eyes as she saw him in the new 
clothes.
    "Like it?" he said, turning slightly and craning his neck to see 
what the back looked like.  By the mirror, Akane was gazing at him 
with shining eyes, hands clasped over her chest.
    "Doesn't Ranma look handsome in that, Nabiki?" she exclaimed.
    "I - um, that is, sure.  They're not too bad."  Nabiki's control 
was back in place, but she had been shaken for a moment.  He was sure 
of it.  And Akane... the look in her eyes...
    "Hmm..."  Ranma glanced up at the saleslady.  "I'll take it."

    A raindrop struck his eye, and Ranma jerked in surprise, the memory 
fading like a dream exposed to light.  He angrily wiped the offending 
moisture away, ignoring the rest.  Maybe, just maybe, if he didn't 
acknowledge it, it wouldn't exist.
    He snorted.  Yeah, right.  And maybe Akane will come back, too.
    As he passed a particularly shabby building, he could make out the 
faint strains of music coming from somewhere inside.  Drawn by the 
mournful half-heard melody, he crept up to a shattered window and 
peeked through.
    An old man was sprawled under a weathered desk in the center of the 
rubble-strewn room, it's meager protection affording him a relatively 
dry place on the damp floor.  His eyes were closed, and the rhythm of 
his breathing suggested sleep.  A tiny battery-powered radio was 
precariously perched on a brick near the old mans head, and that was 
where the song was coming from.
    Ranma leaned in through the window.  Something about the song was 
calling to him, and he knew that he had to hear it clearly, even if 
only for a moment.
    As his head entered the building, the outside noises - gusts of 
wind from the gathering storm, automobiles honking their horns a block 
or so away, and others - were abruptly silenced, leaving only the 
music.
    It was a slow song.  Some instrument Ranma couldn't identify - 
electric guitar, maybe? - was wailing the tune, while slow drums and a 
low-pitched instrument kept beat.  And a man was singing, with an 
almost hypnotic quality to his voice.


   You said you didn't need me in your life
   Oh I guess you were right, yeah
   Ooh I never meant to cause you no pain
   But it looks like I did it again, yeah

   Now I, now I know I wish it would rain down, down on me
   Ooh yes I wish it would rain, rain down on me now
   Ooh God I wish it would rain down, down on me
   Ooh yes I wish it would rain on me

   Though your hurt is gone, mines hanging on, inside, and I know
   Well it's eating me through, it's eating me through every
      night and day
   I'm just waiting on your side

   Cause I know, I know, I never meant to cause you no pain
   And I realize I let you down, oh yeah
   But I know in my heart of hearts
   I know I'm never gonna hold you again, no

   Now I, now I know I wish it would rain down, down on me
   Oh you know I wish it would rain, rain down on me now
   Ooh yes I wish it would rain down, down on me
   Yes you know I wish it would rain down, rain down over me

   Just rain down over me
   Just let rain down, let rain down, let rain down
   Oh yeah well let it rain down, rain down over me
   Just let rain down, just let rain down, let it rain down
   Just let it rain


    As the music faded, Ranma let himself down from the window.  Tears 
flowed freely on his cheeks, and he made no motion to wipe them off.
    I love you, Akane, he thought, then turned away from the building 
and began walking.
    Overhead, the clouds finally released their contents.  Rain came.  
Slowly at first, but building intensity until it was almost a 
downpour.  No lightning flashed, no gusts of wind tried to sweep Ranma 
off her feet.  In fact, except for the rain, the storm was strangely 
quiet.  It was as if the sky shared her pain, was crying with her, and 
she spared a moment to look up at it as the rain poured down, pausing 
in the middle of the crumbling sidewalk.  Then, although still 
saddened, she set her jaw, tugged the jacket a little closer around 
her body, and began the long trek home.  Gentle gusts of wind caressed
her face, which showed no sign of the pain she was experiencing.  The
only evidence, the tears that still coursed down her cheeks, was masked
by the water from above.
    And the rain came down.

   Just let rain down, just let rain down, let it rain down
   Just let it rain...


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Authors Notes:
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Whew.

In case it wasn't obvious :)  the inspiration for this piece was 'I Wish
It Would Rain Down' by Phil Collins (1989).  If you haven't heard it,
then I suggest you find someone who has it and listen to it 
immediately.  It's a great piece, and is one of the most beautiful 
songs I've ever heard.

I was listening to one of my personal collections (I mix my own CD's), 
and this song came up.  It was lightly raining outside, I was in a 
melancholy mood anyway, and I just happened to be in front of my 
computer.

This is the result. ;)

I don't know what - if anything - I'm going to do with this.  I may 
incorporate it into a story later on, although I'm not sure about 
that.  It would make a good start to one though... hmm... ;)

C&C welcome.  Thanks, FFML.

Brian Payne
sofaspud@ior.com
brianp@nhspokane.com
http://www.ior.com/~sofaspud


As always, Ranma 1/2 and the characters therein belong to Rumiko 
Takahashi and not me.  I'm just borrowing them for a bit. ;)