On Tue, 6 Apr 1999, Louis-Philippe Giroux wrote:

At 19:15 -0400 04/04/99, kuro taka wrote:

 From the left rings true a voice that strikes annoyance deep into the
hearts of many a female in attendance at the famed Furinkan High.  "Vile
sorcerer Phoenix.  Thou shalt not toy with the hearts of thine gracious
and devoted fans.  I Tatewaki Kuno, risen star of the high school
fencing circles, The Blue Thunder of Furi..."

   Phoenix poses in front of the Blue Blunder and begins his own
counter-speech.

   "I do not fear ye, for I am...  THE KING OF THE SQUIRRELS!"

   <Deep, Deeeeep, But I Mean REEEAAAALLLLYYYY  Deep Silence>

   Phoenix shrugs.  "Okay, okay, so maybe I'm not."

Of course, you do realize that when Kuno makes his speeches, it's
punctuated by thunder and lightning.  How do you plan to punctuate with
squirrel?  Do you have a "Big Acorn" attack?  If surrounded by squirrels,
do you suddenly snap, and scurry up trees in order to horde nuts?

Oh, and I think you're OOC.  ^_^

Waiting for the next chapter,

-Natsume Ranma Ranma
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The sardines weren't worth the trouble.  A few more shots, then 
Ryoga-san would overheat and explode.  Ducking around a corner, 
I managed to lose him as I entered the ramshackle residence of 
my Anime supplier.

One look at his face and I knew that I was betrayed.  "Tell me."
I insisted.  He refused, so I slammed him against the wall.
"Last chance.  Where can Ranma-Ranma find good fanfics?"
"Try Jason Liao." he whispered, before he slumped to the floor.
I heard the sounds of a door splintering as I left through the 
window, one step ahead of Tendo Heavy Industries...