"Miller, Bert" <bert.miller@unisys.com> wrote:

Guzu Yogore stared at the strange person glowering at him. "Do I know

 ^ "slowpoke dirt", huh?

Gotta come up with the names somehow. :-)

"Your turn'll be next, Shirazu. See you in school!" Ukyo said
threateningly, then quickly slipped out of sight.

So Ukyou even adopts the same modus operandi?  Why?  Does she think
this is an effective means of confronting them, or does she think
that all these sixteen-year-olds really knew what was going on?

It's an effective way, because it puts them on the defensive. (Also, it
clues the reader into what's going on. This *is* a spamfic, remember.
^_^)

This was another one hour fic, inspired by a certain fanfic cliche.
Multitudes of fics postulate Genma as having made zillions of fiancee
arrangements for Ranma as a child, even though he only did this *once*

Well... twice.  Don't forget the Chardins.

Ranma wasn't "as a child" for that one.

Well... Mr Kuonji had a limited supply of Okonomiyaki carts, for one?

Not all of them necessarily stole the cart. Some of them might have just
agreed to the marriage for whatever reason, and then run off.

You could actually make a second or third arrangement for Ukyou very
plausible, as a rebound arrangement by a father who thought the Saotomes
were gone for good.  Use the "Ukyou's father was dying and he's concerned
for her upbringing" idea, or, better yet, he thought he was, but survived.

Yeah, that works. Or the Saotome one could be a second one, with a
previous one having run off in the same manner.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics.html