Scene: Small room in a third world country

Motoko Chan: Wow! A C&C for my EVA/MKR crossover...
Its been over a week since I posted it. 

[Motoko Chan read's the c&c]

Motoko Chan:...

[Motoko Chan read's some more...]

Motoko Chan:...

[After reading the C&C, Motoko Chan started banging
her head on the keyboard of her computer]

Motoko Chan: OH GEEZ WHY DON'T YOU JUST WRITE THE
WHOzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Announcer: Do to technical difficulties our show will
temporarily sign off.

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Bombadil-san,

I Do appreciate your c&c. Really. And i do know that
you"re more experience that me when it come to
writing, which i respect.  The prologue of No Future
but the one you Make was written in that way cause i
liked it that way and it was my way of writing on 
Lilith's point of view on what has appened to her for
the past millenume or so.

I wrote it that way so that i can paint an image where
Lilith was the first in everything on this piece of
dirt we call earth. Even before GOD. Since Lilith,
Adam and most of the Angels were not really explored
in EVA, i decided to give them more depth. Why were
they like that in the series, etc, etc... And i wont
end my series in a Third Impact fashion. I do like EVA
enough that i wont kill them. How? By avoiding third
impact at all. 

There's a lot of things in my head as of the momment
about my crossover, and admittedly, there are a lot of
hole (in the plot) that needed to be pluged up before
production continues. And i cant think of a way to use
Hikaru, Umi, and Fuu aside from stopping Lilith from
taking over the world(oops plot hint).    
  
I do agree with you that my grammar needs improvement.
A lot of improvement. And i dont pretend that i'm
perfect and english _is_ only my second laguage. I did
used both grammar and spelling checker of my Winword
and i did weed most of my errors out before posting
it. 

I don't have a pre-reader yet cause I'm not yet done
writing chapter one. And even i finished chapter one,
i might not request for a pre-reader until chaper
three is done.(a long time, believe me) 

Why?

So that the story will be solid enough for my future
pre-readers a chance to actually get the my concepts
as well as enough material to disect. Gets.

If you want to write a story using my idea, go ahead.
Please i  insist I mean the idea was to get the ball
rolling about EVA/MKR crossovers or fusion ne?

Motoko Chan
-no comment as of this time ladies and gents. 

   
 

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