On Sun, 28 Mar 1999, Michael Ricketts wrote:

I'm a little annoyed with the ending, but can't think of a better way

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for the first time" But I just... don't like the ending... *sighs*

I liked almost the entire fic.  But, as you're already aware, the ending
simply does not fit.

Also, I'm sure someone will pick up that sometimes I put thoughts in
""'s and sometimes I leave them as almost narrative comments... Just my
way I'm afriad, I'm pretty sure I won't change it, it's easy enough to
see who's point of veiw it is.

I didn't notice, but you should pick a style and stick with it, you know?
:)

I'd like to thank my prereaders... No wait... I have none... Instead
I'll thank my friends for abandoning me in this hour of need... Oh,
while I'm at it...

Wanted: prereaders, for a relativly new author, need to be
understanding,
encouraging and good at offering valid criticism, but willing to beat
in hours of slackness.

I volunteer.