It's nice to see another fic about Robotech. And i do
like where this story is going to but there are things
which this story i dont get and lacks.

Can you explain the time line some more. Its pre second
gen, and after SDF-3 left for Tirol. Right?

Details. The details are very glossed over especially
when it comes to the ships and mechs. I dont recall a
veritech named Shrike. Is this your own creation? If so
can you give more details in your next chapter?

Another thing is the how does Alpha supports his fleet?
Where did he got all the equipment and protoculture to
power them. In the second part, there was around five
or so battle pods and two power armors that was used in
the assult. Where did Alpha got it? And his ship?
Theres no surviving Zentraedi ship at the final days of
the first Robotech Wars. All of them were detroyed.
Those that did were used as materials for SDF-3.  

Dont take this C&C wrong, i do like the story but
please flesh it out some more? 

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