Subject: [FFML] [fic]Untitled...for now
From: MkBunny9@aol.com
Date: 3/31/1999, 5:43 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

konnichiwa minna-san! This is one of my first feeble attempts to (B
write a fan fic so send me comments and criticisms! also, this (B
has no name yet, so please help me title this fic. I will give (B
credit to anyone who helps me. thanks.(B

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Untitled - A Dark Fic (B

Standard disclaimers apply. This occurs anytime after the Yu Yu (B
Hakusho series.(B

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"No, don't leave me, you don't have leave do you? You've done (B
your best in fighting and you don't deserve this. Please, don't (B
leave me. YUUSKE!" Keiko cried over Yuuske's lifeless form. A (B
disease caused by Meitei, a youkai that uses diseases to attack, (B
had killed him. Yuuske had fought bravely, saving Keiko's life.(B

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Yuuske, Keiko, Botan, Koenma, Hiei, Kurama, Kuwabara, Yukina, (B
Shizuru, and Atuko were walking down the street, coming back (B
from a makai tournament, which Yuuske won again. They were all (B
chatting happily, even Hiei, which was quite unusual for him, (B
when Meitei appeared. "You will pay for what you have done to me (B
Urameshi Yuuske!" Meitei screamed.  Yuuske responded, "What did (B
I do to you? I only killed you because I had to win and you were (B
in my way. Is there a problem with that?" Meitei growled, "Of (B
course there is! I'm going to kill you and take you to the (B
reikai!" Before Yuuske can respond, Keiko said, "He's already (B
been dead twice. I don't think he needs to die anytime soon in (B
the next 50 years!" "Oh, little girl covering up for a big guy (B
like Yuuske?" Meitei said mockingly. "Shut up or I'm going to (B
kill you once more!" Yuuske screamed. "Yeah, shut up and I'm not (B
a little girl" Keiko came back. Meitei then said, "How about you (B
pretty boy? If you were a little shorter and you wore a dress, (B
everyone will think you are a girl!" Kurama spat back, "At least (B
I don't look like a backside with pairs of hands and feet (B
sticking out of the sides!" "Thanks. I'll take as a compliment. (B
I am the best looking out of my race!" Meitei exclaimed. (B
Everyone but Meitei$B!"(J sweat dropped. Then Meitei continued, (B
"And you, shorty? I can kill you like squashing a fly!" Hiei (B
spoke quietly but menacingly, "Hn. You say one more word about (B
me and you can go to hell with you ugly face. By the way, which (B
side is your front? You've got too many backsides on you." "Do (B
you know who we are?" Kurama and Yuuske spoke at the same time. (B
"Yeah, you're the 'famous' Urameshi Team with Youko Kurama, (B
Hiei, Urameshi Yuuske, and Kuwabara Kazuma. I bet you I can (B
stomp you sorry butts. And Kuwabara, what's wrong with you? (B
You're so tall and lanky; you probably can't even fight! And who (B
are those girls? They don't know what to do, do they? And how (B
about that other tall boy?" Shizuru screamed, "Shut up! We can (B
fight if we really wanted to! I'm Shizuru, and next to Yuuske on (B
the right side is Keiko and on the left is Atuko! Between Keiko (B
and Kazuma is Yukina and the girl next to the "tall boy" is (B
Botan! And the "tall boy" next to Botan is Koenma! Now do you (B
know who everybody is? AND ONCE FOR ALL, SHUT UP!" But Meitei (B
continued to taunt, "Thank you for your elegant speech Shizuru. (B
Anyway, little boy, or Hiei I should say, why are you so short?" (B
Hiei lost it. "That's it!" And Hiei started running towards (B
Meitei, but Yuuske and Kurama stopped him. Kurama murmured, (B
"Hiei, this is Yuuske's fight. Let him have a piece of Meitei (B
and then you can finish him off." Hiei stopped and said, "Hn." (B
Hiei retreated and Kurama backed everyone off.(B

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"I....should...have st..opped...him ri.,,ght then...I knew...he (B
di..dn't have...enough..reki..left..." Keiko whispered while (B
sobbing. "It's not your fault Keiko-chan." Kurama confronted (B
her. "But...but.." "Hush..."a voice came from behind her. The (B
voice belonged to Atuko. She hugged Keiko tightly, rocking back (B
and forth to calm her down.(B

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"Haaaa......." Yuuske breathed in deeply and inhaled. He was (B
gathering his reki, but he didn't have much left from the battle (B
several hours before. "This isn't going to be a clean match..." (B
Yuuske thought as he felt Meitei's first move. (B
"Keishinkokubiyou!" Meitei shouted and several black strands of (B
plague shot out from his mouth. Koenma made a "wall" for (B
everyone around him so they don't get inflicted with the plague. (B
"Have fun with the bubonic plague Urameshi!" Meitei roared. (B
Yuuske dodged most of the strands, but there were so many (B
strands he couldn't dodge two of them. "Agh!" Yuuske screamed as (B
he saw parts of his skin becoming black. The black spots became (B
painful like a thousand needles stabbing him at each spot and (B
Yuuske screamed more. "He's gotten better since the (B
tournament...and I only have one rei gun shot left. I can't (B
miss." Yuuske thought as Meitei started another attack. (B

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"Why...why....WHY?" Keiko screamed in Atuko's arms. Why did it (B
always have to happen to Yuuske? Why couldn't he live a normal (B
life? "WHY?" And then Keiko released a wail that could have (B
woken up the dead. (B

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"Ankokubyokigoroshi!" Meitei screamed. "This may kill me once (B
more, but at least I will take Urameshi's life with me," Meitei (B
thought as he shot a spray of black water from his mouth. This (B
water carried a disease that will kill anyone that it touches, (B
even a drop, and is unprotected by a "wall". "Oh man...I'm (B
dead..." Yuuske thought. Then he had an idea. "Maybe it will (B
work...but there is a possibility that will get killed too. But (B
I can't think of anything else. I better tell Keiko now or (B
she'll never know." Yuuske thought. He looked over at Keiko who (B
was shaking with fear behind Koenma's wall and smiled at her, (B
mouthing 5 words to her then turning his attention back to (B
Meitei.  And he started to use his last plan.  (B

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"When he looked at me with that look...I should have known.....I (B
should have known that he meant it as a good bye...why didn't (B
tell me earlier instead of now? Why?" Keiko moaned. "What did he (B
say? I saw him mouthing something, but I couldn't make it (B
out..." Kurama asked. "...He said, 'I'll love you forever, (B
Keiko'"(B

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"All my reiki, gather!" Yuuske thought and he felt the familiar (B
heat at the tip of his finger. He saw the water rushing towards (B
him and when the water was a meter away, he screamed, "REI GUN!" (B
The blast was big enough that it was even bigger than him. But (B
he made a mistake in making the blast too big.  The water parted (B
as the blast shot through it, but it quickly gathered its self (B
back together again. As the black water hit Yuuske, the last (B
thought in his mind was, "Everyone, take care of Keiko for (B
me..." He went limp and dropped dead to the floor, never getting (B
to see his own blast kill Meitei. (B
Koenma let the wall fall and everyone rushed to Yuuske side. (B
Keiko immediately grabbed Yuuske's still form and started to (B
shake him. Kurama and Koenma tried to stop her, but she didn't (B
stop until she was sure he was dead. "Yuuske..." Keiko sobbed. (B
Then Koenma spoke up. "Keiko-chan, I have granted him the wish (B
to speak to you in your dreams, so you will be able to talk to (B
him every night if you wish. Also, he will be reborn soon, into (B
another body, but he will look exactly the same with the same (B
traits that you will not know the difference. It is fated that (B
you two will cross paths once more, so please be patient wait (B
for that day to come. You still have Yuuske in you, Keiko-chan." (B
Koenma concluded. "Don't leave me Yuuske..."(B

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"Keiko...lets go home...it's been a few hours since we arrived (B
here. We can't spend the rest of our lives here! And besides, (B
you come here every day. I'm sure he's happy." Akiko exclaimed. (B
"He's been dead for 3 months already. And miracles are not going (B
to happen anymore." Botan said. "I know...hey, wait up for me (B
guys!" Keiko shouted as she tried to catch up with the whole (B
gang. But not before saying something towards the grave. "I love (B
you too Yuuske. See you tonight." And she ran off to catch up (B
with her friends, hoping to cross paths with Yuuske once more.  (B


Author's Notes:(B

At the beginning, this wasn't going to be a dark fic, but I (B
changed my mind in the middle of writing the story. Also, this (B
is only on of my fist fan fics, so it's probably not that good. (B
Meitei is my character. Send comments or criticisms to (B
mkbunny9@aol.com. Comments and criticicms are welcomed, even (B
encouraged. Thanks. (B