Subject: Re: [Sick][R.5]Re: [FFML] [challenge] A very strange fanfic challenge...
From: Jason Liao
Date: 3/30/1999, 9:25 PM
To: Sam Vere
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

On Tue, 30 Mar 1999, Sam Vere wrote:

On Mon, 29 Mar 1999, Jason Liao wrote:

The headers right. 

I was.

I suppose that since the fic performed as labeled, that's good in a way...

This fic was an experiment in using actions to convey emotions.  Rather
than have Mousse blab for two paragraphs, I mixed in the hand motion and
varying volume levels attempting to allow those to tell part of the tale. 
Did it work well, or do you think that I need to change anything?


-Natsume Ranma Ranma
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The sardines weren't worth the trouble.  A few more shots, then 
Ryoga-san would overheat and explode.  Ducking around a corner, 
I managed to lose him as I entered the ramshackle residence of 
my Anime supplier.

One look at his face and I knew that I was betrayed.  "Tell me."
I insisted.  He refused, so I slammed him against the wall.
"Last chance.  Where can Ranma-Ranma find good fanfics?"
"Try Jason Liao." he whispered, before he slumped to the floor.
I heard the sounds of a door splintering as I left through the 
window, one step ahead of Tendo Heavy Industries...