I really wasn't going to, but...

    After such an intense orgasm, she should have been panting
heavily; however, she lay unnaturally still, the rise and fall of a
chest
filling with air curiously absent.

---------

     "Well?" Ranma asked.  "Did you like it?"

    "Ranma," Nabiki said, finally stirring, "that was perfectly awful.
Is this what you call lovemaking?  I feel sorry for what my sister
has to look forward to."

    Ranma's face fell.  "Do you really think so?" he asked.  "I tried
so hard... this sort of thing doesn't come easy to me, I guess."

    "Sorry," Nabiki said, "but you can't be good at everything."

    "I suppose not," Ranma said, getting up.  "Still," he said,
crumpling up the paper and tossing it into the corner, "when I heard
you were publishing erotic stories, I thought I'd give it a stab...."

FINI