Subject: [FFML] Fanfic Challenge Reply.... BGC: Night Terrors.
From: "Robyn, Duke of Amber" <seraphim@sentex.net>
Date: 3/30/1999, 3:52 AM
To: ffml@fanfic.com
Newsgroups: rec.arts.anime.creative,alt.fan.bgcrisis





   Okay, This piece is based on the following phrase (in the ***) as part
  of a challenge on the fanfiction mailing list (to continue a story with
  the aforementioned statement.
  Honestly, I had a bit of a problem as I found the phrase is a little
  awkward for me...
  There *seems* to be a word missing. I could be wrong but I'm gonna put
  one in (well three if you count the words "of" and "the" ).
  Since i'm a cheater in this respect I'm giving myself a time limit...
  (an hour -well during commercial breaks.)  :)


                         Night Terror.
                              N.A.Sinclair
                                 seraphim@sentex.net

  ***After such an intense orgasm, she should have been panting heavily;
  however, she lay unnaturally still, the **sound of the *** rise and fall
  of a chest filling with air curiously absent.****

   The outside traffic cast erratic light as it moved past the heavily
  curtained windows. The sound of the city made a heartbeat of it's own.

   Leon shifted in the bed and propped himself up on one elbow.

  "Hey?" He said nudging his partner. "Hey."

   He froze.

   SHE lay there.

   Her hair was spread out like a white frosty halo.
  Her eyes were like golden coins.
  Her skin... so pale and so beautiful .... so unreal.

   He pulled the sheet back and her body was there
  looking like the first time.

   She was dressed in the torn rags of what was once lingerie.
  the stockings were ripped and torn and the bustier open
  exposing the coral pink of her pale nipples.

   Bullet holes riddled her body.
  (center mass he observed.)
  The pale pink perfect flesh was ripped and torn exposing what
  lay beneath.
  Thick red and oily, lubricant welled through the gashes and wounds.
  Dull metal resisted shining in the rooms dim light.

   He felt acid rise in his throat but also felt his own throat close
  constrictively with fear.

   The golden eyes blinked. The arms reached to hold him.

   "Kill me again." her voice was oh so sweet.

   "Love me again."

   He fought to free himself but she would not let go.

   "Leon. Leon wake up!"

   He opened his eyes and found himself wrapped up in warmth.

   "Wha...."

   "You've gotta wake up or I'll bust your friggin head."

   "I'm up!" He protested.

   "Are you sure?" He was shifted and and pushed away.

   Priss looked at him (no appraised him) from arm's length.

   Her eyes looked even darker in the poorly lit trailer.

   "You look awake." She said critically frowning.

   "I said I was awake."

   "O.k. o.k. you don't have be such a big baby. Sheesh."

   "Big baby. Who's a big baby?" He felt his muscles relaxing as they
  began a familiar ritual.

   "Well...." She started, and he could sense rather than see the lines of
  her uneven smile.
  "Let's see.  Who exactly was the one who just woke me up?"

   "Are you sure it wan't your snoring that scared me?"

   "Snoring? I don't think so....Some cop with the heebie-jeebies more
  like."

   "Well like that's a problem... who woke ME last week with a
  strangle-hold?"

   "I was expressing my affection."

   "Vigilante scum."

   "Useless civil servant."

   "Delinquent rocker."

   "Obsessive fan."

   "How bad was it?" She asked tenderly.

   He swallowed. "Unfortunately typical."

   She pulled him to her and he came willingly.

   He wrapped his arms around her and lost himself in the warm
  aliveness of her. -the scent of her hair.

   As he entered her she whispered. "I'll make you forget."


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"The Pink-Haired Goddess, the Blue-Haired Goddess, I can't decide....
   I must have them both!"
                (Me in Kuno mode thinking about Mizumo Ami and Nene)
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   Robyn, Duke of Amber. Agent of Chaos. Part-time-God. Monkey-Boy 
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