This is response to the challenge from Monsieur Lurker...

The characters are Keiichi Fujishima's .  Please don't kill me for this
fic...

The rules for this challenge are simple:

Write a fanfic, of any length, in any series, which begins with the
following sentence:


"After such an intense orgasm, she should have been panting heavily;
however, she lay unnaturally still, the rise and fall of a chest filling
with air curiously absent."

A Night to Remember

by JC

After such an intense orgasm, she should have been panting heavily;
however, she lay unnaturally still, the rise and fall of a chest filling
with air curiously absent.

*Oh my god!*, thought an exhausted Keiichi, *I killed her!*

To his surprise, Belldandy resumed breathing with a loud gasp that
shattered the silence moments later.

She looked up at Keiichi with tenderness evident in her eyes.  As she
searched his weary face, she noticed an undercurrent of tension belying
his stoic expression.

"Why are you worried, Keiichi, dear?  Was I not good enough for you?",
breathed Belldandy as he rolled over to the side of the bed.

Keiichi quietly stammered, "Uh, that was perfect Bell.  Just perfect."

He was unnerved a bit by the way Belldandy started to smile at him.  A
rabbit staring down the maw of a boa constrictor might have shared a
fairly similar experience.

Belldandy writhed about in a sensuous manner and rolled over on top of
Keiichi.

"Hmm�  I sensed a bit of�  hesitation." Belldandy cooed, "Well, let's
see if we can get it just right this time."

*Keiichi mentally cringed at that last statement.*

It was going to be a long night�


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James Chu
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