this is....completely...absulutely...and utterly...insane...
I liked it!!
but it did take forever and a half to get written though.  oh well! thats the way the thermonuclear cat melts the pavement...
but seriously, telletubies vs. barnie? it would never be a match...  the most evil peice of sponge rubber against some really funkey looking tellevision thingies?  the sheer evil funkieness level would melt them long before they even got close enough to start attacking it...

on the more serious side of the matter, some comments

	The sounds of birds singing their merry little >tune, that is 
until one of the neighbor's cats decided that they >would make a good 
breakfast.  Fortunately for the birds, the cat was so >fat from being fed 
by said neighbors that when she pounced upon the >branch in which the 
birds lay, broke under her considerable weight.

didnt get the relevence...


the line about them vibrateing due to suger overload:
 caffine is usually the cause for vibration and manical hyperactivity...  so whatever they ate must have been nearly pure suger, and a lot of it...

the neko ken anology was quite apt...for they were in the grip of *gasp* the sucrose-ken (insert overly loud omonous music, and maybe a lightning flash or two)

"Open the door Pop," He knew it was Ranma. "We just >want to play 
with you."  The sound of his voice sent shivers up >and down Genma's 
spine.  He turned his back on his son, sitting down, >and covering his 
ears so he wouldn't have to here the little taunts >and the screams from 
the adults.  When that wasn't enough he started >singing out loud to 
drown out the voices.

overly terrifying ;)


ah well, keep up the good work, looking foreward to the next installment.


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 urainum, hollow point,solid core, self propeled,
 laser guided, auto-tracking, high explosive,
 anti-personell, incinidairy, heat seeking, cat!!

was that over the top? I never can tell anymore...




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