From: "Nikholas F. Toledo Zu" <niftol@i-manila.com.ph>
To: ffml@fanfic.com
Subject: [FFML] [sF] [R.5] It Doesn't Matter, Does It?
Date: Tue, 23 Mar 1999 12:38:41 +0800

Wow.  Um, Ranma was created by Rumiko Takahashi, and these are all her 
characters and creations.  The copyrights to it are also held by 
Shogakukan and Kitty Film in Japan, and by Viz Communications in the 
Northern Americas.  Haven't written a disclaimer, much less for a 
shortfic, in quite a while.  Um, if someone else has done this, I'm 

sorry 

- this came to mind and I needed to write, and the exercise.  Jeez 

Louise.

<snip>

"Ranma will go with Akane to her first year in junior high - it's so
perfect!"  The two fathers laughed gleefully, despite the imminent
disasters that lay ahead.

Well.  This was... intriguing, by all accounts.  There were a few points 
when I was unsure who was speaking, especially when two sisters were 
talking--I think you might want to go through and make sure it's clear 
who a particular "she" refers to.

As for the ideas involved... My, my, my.  About what I've learned to 
expect, coming from the Zu crew--subtle shifts in personality and events 
that promise so much more down the road, deft characterization, and 
well-edited prose.

Please, by all means, continue this.

--Freemage

Switch
-------------------------------------------------------------------------
The Nikholas F. Toledo Zu @ WWW: The Entertainment Capital of UP 

Village

Vector, Switch, Yebah, Rain Man, goo, Pervert, Scruples, Hollie, NomaD, 
Blitz, Gee, Datzo, Jewel, elf, Radler, Pinball, Mayhem, Chaos, Father, 
Attar and Llewe @ 

http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Flats/3145/mezza9.html 

Fanfiction Page @ 

http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Flats/3145/fanfics.html

-------------------------------------------------------------------------

Get Your Private, Free Email at http://www.hotmail.com