Maybe it was because I heard this song on the radio this morning on my
way home from work, but I thought your songfic was quite cute. The
lyrics and meter fit well into the source material, which is a quality
sometimes lacking in other attempts I've read.

Jamie
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       "Why are they wearing bras?"
          -Rachel Wilde, age 4,
while watching the Dirty *ahem* Lovely Angels...
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