In a message dated 3/14/99 5:04:14 PM Pacific Standard Time, emily9@erols.com
writes:

"Lullaby"
 A Maison Ikkoku fanfic written by Emily Siazon.
 All characters are owned by Rumiko Takahashi. No infringement is
 intended.
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 Part 2
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Whew.  This chapter was every bit of emotionaly wenching as the first.  I will
admit to quite a bit of surprise in the middle there, as being a rabid
devourer of SM fan fiction, I rather naturally assumed Makoto was a she.  I
dont agree with Sochiro's interpretation of his parents wishes, though.
Having to aquire a wife (and get her pregnant) in the time remaining does NOT
mean having to give up Makoto.  There might also be the possiblity that
Sochiro is doing this deliberatly (alabiet possibly subconciously) to make it
easier on Makoto when the end comes.

And Sochiro has learned a very true, very painfull lesson about life.  It IS
never easy, regardless of if your dying or not.

As to the Yaoi tag, its just as well that you didnt include it.  I personally
interpret the Yaoi tag as the fic conveying a LOT more "adult" activites than
you showed here.  You are right that if you had, I would have assumed that
there was material in here that I didnt want to read (even though there
wasn't, really) and would not have read this, nor given you any C&C on it.

On technical notes, I didnt see anything spelling or grammer wise that looked
like it needed fixing.