First off, a very nice story.  One enjoyed the look into the
relationship, and the look into Ranma's view of himself.  

But one noticed one thing...


 > 	Kasumi spoke to the stunned Hikaru. "Hikaru-chan, what Ranma did
 > was definitely wrong. But under the circumstances, it was the only
 > thing he could do. And he knew he wasn't doing the right thing, too.
 > 	We all make mistakes, especially when we're young. But he's

There should be an opening quotation mark for the start of a new
paragraph here.

 > 	"Talk to him." She repeated. "He knows how you're upset, and
 > that's scaring him. He also knows that he shouldn't have acted that way
 > toward you, and is feeling guilty. He loves you and fears your
 > sadness more than your anger.
 > 	This is the first real fight you two have had, and maybe won't be

...and here as well.

It's a tricky thing, because you _don't_ need the closing quote on the 
end of the previous paragraph.  But otherwise, a good fic.

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Jeffery "Taper" Wickel                            jtwickel@nyx.net 
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186,000 mps--it's not the law, it's just a challenge