-----Original Message-----
From: Sarah K. Pozniak <sylverleaf@geocities.com>
To: ffml <ffml@fanfic.com>
Date: 20 March 1999 23:29
Subject: [FFML][Teaser][Ranma 1/2]Cat Scratch

Cat Scratch
by Sylverleaf

I'm afraid that there's not much constructive C&C but there's not much to be
constructive about in something under 5kb. Plus, I couldn't find much wrong
with the writing, apart from this...

Akane looked up  at him. "Mereow?"

~there's an unnecessary extra space between "up" and "at"~

"Don't claw down there.  Good kitty, be nice."  As Ranma continued to

~Ouch. >_<  I know what it's like, I have 'battle scars' from my cat, too.
;) ~

pet her, Akane slowly settled down and drifted off to asleep.  Ranma
turned towards the kitchen and squeaked,  "Kasumi... help me?"

~*grin* A nice role reversal here. I had to read it twice to realise that it
was _Akane_ and not Ranma who was acting all catty. I'm intrigued by this
idea as I've personally never seen it done before. I'm looking forward to
seeing the explanation of why it's Akane like this - what exactly happened.
Also, I'll be reading to see how anyone tries to capitalise on her
condition.

By the way, in this fanfic, does Ranma's cat phobia still exist
or is it just Akane? I'm curious (must not make pun involving 'cat' and
'curiosity'... must resist...).

~Kayu-chan