On Wed, 17 Mar 1999, Bobby wrote:
Good chapter. Great humour as usual, the end scene was a classic.
However it seemed like you were switching between prose and script
format.
Was this intentional?
Script? Er... where exactly is it script? O.o
BTW Ryo is one of the best characters to appear in a Ranma fanfic. The
only character I like more would be the IMBS version of Ranma. I hope he
will still appear in this 'fic despite your notes for the third act.
At best, he'll have a small piece of the action in act 3. I'm
saving him up for the finale, act 4.
thanks for reading,
-rod "tyop? what typo?" m