Good chapter. Great humour as usual, the end scene was a classic. 
However it seemed like you were switching between prose and script
format.
Was this intentional? 

BTW Ryo is one of the best characters to appear in a Ranma fanfic. The 
only character I like more would be the IMBS version of Ranma. I hope he
will still appear in this 'fic despite your notes for the third act.

Eagerly awaiting the next installment.

Bobby
My Shrine to Kasumi Tendo
http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Field/6390/