I don't get it...  ^_^

Okay, seriously, I found it pretty good.  However, I don't quite agree
with the ending as justice.  Perhaps a God of Honor, or Obligations would
do this, but to punish Ukyou to a life like that is justice?  In regard to
what?  Also, the wording wasn't "I want Ranma to care for me." She said
she wanted Ranma to carry out his promise.  The promise was to marry, not
to care.

Still, assuming that the actual God in question isn't integral to the fic,
that's just semantics.  Still pretty good for under two hours.

-Natsume Ranma Ranma 

-Natsume Ranma Ranma
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The sardines weren't worth the trouble.  A few more shots, then 
Ryoga-san would overheat and explode.  Ducking around a corner, 
I managed to lose him as I entered the ramshackle residence of 
my Anime supplier.

One look at his face and I knew that I was betrayed.  "Tell me."
I insisted.  He refused, so I slammed him against the wall.
"Last chance.  Where can Ranma-Ranma find good fanfics?"
"Try Jason Liao." he whispered, before he slumped to the floor.
I heard the sounds of a door splintering as I left through the 
window, one step ahead of Tendo Heavy Industries...