. She could have been in her hotel room by now,

sipping
hot tea and savoring the delicious warmth.

"its delicious warmth." maybe, or are you refering to the room's

warmth?

Both, really.

Then say both.  "...and savoring the delicious warmth of both."

Not that I think Gary's story needs even more commentary... but I like this
sentence just the way it is.  ^_^  Somewhat ambiguous, I suppose, but not in
any way confusing to me.

Good idea.

They puppy part suprised me, I did expect a baby.  Maybe
Ukyo should have asked for Ranma's love instead.

Maybe, but she didn't have any grounds for that.

Actually she might.  Ukyo gave Ranma her love, it would be justice for it
to be returned.

All this talk of Ukyo becoming Ranma and Akane's baby makes me think of
Angus's "Second Spring".  I always liked the ending to that.  ^_^


There's a neat story there, even if nobody writes it.