From: Jason Liao <jasonl@hun.k12.nj.us>
Date: Tue, 16 Mar 1999 23:12:58 -0500 (EST)

I don't get it...  ^_^

Okay, seriously, I found it pretty good.  However, I don't quite
agree with the ending as justice.  Perhaps a God of Honor, or
Obligations would do so, but to punish Ukyou to a life like that is
justice?  Also, the wording wasn't "I want Ranma to care for me." She
said she wanted Ranma to carry out his promise.  The promise was to
marry, not to care.

Still, assuming that the actual God in question isn't integral to the
fic, that's all just small stuff.  Still pretty good for under two
hours.

I have to ask; when did *Ranma* promise to marry her? It was *Genma* who 
made that promise - a promise he had no right to make, one made just to 
satisfy his own stomach!

Chad Walker, cswvna@hotmail.com (main)
csw1test@hotmail.com (FFML handler)

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