Subject: Re: [FFML] CS8 FFML release? (fwd)
From: Chris Willmore <4cw6@qlink.queensu.ca>
Date: 3/15/1999, 4:02 AM
To: David Johnston <rgorman@telusplanet.net>, Rod M <rpm@thekeep.org>
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

At 12:58 AM 16/03/99 -0700, you wrote:
I didn't like CS7.  I thought, still think, that a fair bit of it
was meandering into a quagmire.  Fortunately the series seems to have
found it's way back out.  Except that Childra's dream did seem to

Glad to hear it. ^_^ It may not look like it, but we ARE moving 
towards a definite ending...  The next act is the last.

go on at excessive length.  Considering all the kinky stuff going on,
it was surprisingly unerotic.  

It wasn't meant to be erotic, but rather a PG-13-rated parody of lemons.
There seems to be general agreement that it was out of place, though...
Maybe we should excise it and send it out separately as a mini-side story?

I'm puzzled though.  Wasn't samurai armour made out of bamboo?  

No idea.  We'll look it up.

Actually that O.P.I.M. chip was pretty darned smart if it understood
the concept of time travel well enough to realise that killing your
ancestor could be a problem.  

If Rat knows it, the chip knows it.  His brain and the implant work 
alongside each other.

Miyabi really is otnay ootay ightbray.  Ryo Saotome has somehow 
slipped into fanaticism.  Does he even know why he's doing it?

Huh.  I thought Miyabi was of rather average intelligence. o.o  
Might be interesting to explore more along the lines of what you've
found for Ryo S...  

Thanks for the input!

-Chris W.


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