I'm taking a great interest in this story, since
a) it comes from the greatest mind ever to write
Nabiki and Kunou and b) I'm interested in your
portrayal of Nabiki (both of them, actually)
in response to this reversal of worlds.  (In a
way, this makes it a SI of sorts, since 
Wolf-Nabiki wants to change things in the IMBS
world so it gets better.)

Once again, you've managed to establish the characters
in brief shorts bits that get to the heart of their 
emotions and motives.  The most interesting part
of this story is Akane actually getting to *see*
IMBS Ranma at his worst.  This *could* be a spring-
board to an Elseworlds story, but I don't want to
get my hopes up.

Great job, Lara-san.


Trisha L. Sebastian
tls@thekeep.org
Proud Member of the BML Productions Crew

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OVERHEARD:
Two more glasses of scotch, and I'll recite 
Shakespeare in Islamic pentameter.
"Forsooth, what light through yonder window breaks?
It is the east, and Juliet is...not veiled? Stone her! STONE HER!!"
			--Matt Nute

For me, full script is the only real way to do the job.
This is because I am a fucking tyrant.	
			--Warren Ellis
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