At 10:29 PM 3/9/99 -0500, Richard Robinson wrote:

Very Good, very Waffy and very interesting. I enjoyed the
Race Scene, and you managed to stay in character. I was
sorry we didn't get to see Urd but she wasn't really needed
for this story.

I would have liked to put Urd in it, but you're right, she
just was not necessary for it. More of a hindrance, really.
Urd does have her moments though....

By and Large, I thought this was much improved over the
original.

Hehehe... Never underestimate the power of a) rather minor
changes, and b) the ability of time to smooth things over.

--
Rick Robinson
RICHARDROBINSONJR@prodigy.net


If violence is not solving your
problems you're just not using enough of it.

    Misato

"I guess I'm just an old-fashioned sentimentalist at heart.
I refuse
to accept a no-win scenario.  I hate the thought of a
universe without
justice.  If the maneuverings of dark powers can't be
exposed and
defeated by the pure of heart, then there's no point in
anything.  I
can't believe that."
                              -- Benjamin Hutchins

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	a casualty of causality
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	"Khattam-Shud," he said slowly, "is the Arch-Enemy
of all Stories, even of Language itself. He is the Prince of
Silence and the Foe of Speech. And because everything ends,
because dreams end, stories end, life ends, at the finish
of everything we use his name. 'It's finished,' we tell one
another, 'it's over. Khattam-Shud: The End.'"

	-excerpted from Haroun and the Sea of Stories,
		by Salman Rushdie
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