In a message dated 3/9/99 6:08:40 PM, ranmakun@uswest.net writes:

Ranma glared at Akane and shrugged out of her grip. "Akane,
I was raped! How would you know anything about that?"

Just as I had suspected when I read the opening scene. Sadly enough, Ranma-
onna rape scene's all to common, and already dark. Ranma gets raped, then
finds out that 'she's' pregnant with a baby. Akane either fawns over him and
marries him, or Ranma kills himself. Why not go for something else? - like
Ranma running off and join a monastery? ^_- 

One bit- Me thinks you're rushing the revelation of the rape too quickly.
Better drag it out. Because of his pride, Ranma wouldn't admit this fact too
quickly, and esecially not to Akane. He'd simply shut up and refuse to mention
it at all, and the only way Akane would be able to get the truth out of him is
by beating him up.


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