Very Good, very Waffy and very interesting. I enjoyed the
Race Scene, and you managed to stay in character. I was
sorry we didn't get to see Urd but she wasn't really needed
for this story.
By and Large, I thought this was much improved over the
original.
--
Rick Robinson
RICHARDROBINSONJR@prodigy.net


If violence is not solving your
problems you're just not using enough of it.

     Misato

"I guess I'm just an old-fashioned sentimentalist at heart.
I refuse
 to accept a no-win scenario.  I hate the thought of a
universe without
 justice.  If the maneuverings of dark powers can't be
exposed and
 defeated by the pure of heart, then there's no point in
anything.  I
 can't believe that."
                               -- Benjamin Hutchins