Friends?
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Lunchtime, again,  for a certain school in Tokyo-3. I looks like a 

It...

normal school, but if anyone were to look around, they would see an 
abnormal number of security cameras and black limo's passing the 
school... as well as a few distinct students.

The students split up into their normal groups for lunch- those groups 
being Hikari and Asuka, Shinji, Touji and Kensuke, and Rei Ayanami. 

"What's up?" Hikari asked Asuka, inbetween bites of an apple.

in bet...oh, typo...

As normal, Rei walked home. Alone.

normal -> always, makes it smoother...

She didn't think about it much.

She opened her door, and entered the apartment, heading straight to the 
kitchenette. She pulled out a package from the freezer, and placed it 

in 

the microwave, setting the timer.

the first comma need not be there...

She had a door; noone ever knocked on it for any reason.

spaces...spaces... ^_^

Were Shinji and Asuka friends?

Possibly. Shinji more than Asuka. Shinji never tried to insult her.

comma...instead of period

And anyone passing the apartment would hear a small sob, as Rei Ayanami 
performed her nightly ritual of deploring her life.

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