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I have only one thing to say.  Those who are complaining about the
"mean-spirited" nature of the list are doing nothing to detract from it.
Do something constructive.  And now in an effort to do as I say...

First a Sailor Moon/Crystal Tokyo fragment.  This is set in the world
of Sailor Moon Expanded, but is not an approved part of their
continuity.

IMHO, better to write an orignial fic, or at least a new take on the
original anime, than a fanfic on a fanfic: more people will have the
baseline background knowledge you aim at.

And now we turn to a BGC piece which needs a lot of work.

Ehn...  That ones really tough to do without being dull.
Too talky.  Maybe I should alternate between blowing
things up and this ersatz Waiting for Godot junk.

Agreed.  I suggest you lighten up on the interrogation: Mason's got
Sylia, he's pumping her for info, and he's being mean about it; now that
you've established that plot point, move on to something that will keep
the reader's interest.

Next we have the introduction of two characters in a
sort of crossover fic named "Project:  Crimson Sea".

What do you think?  Are they interesting?  How about the
combat?

Now, *this* is good.  New characters that actually have a bit of a
background.  This one has potential...

And what about Naomi?

<scans fic>  Err...Naomi?  I didn't see a reference to "Naomi" in here.