Just wanted to post to anyone who was interested, that Chapter 1 is
almost completely rewritten, and so far I like it much better than what
it was originally. I am currently on page 10 out of 13 and an eigth
(roughly 76% complete) so you should see this sometime this week, maybe
tomorrow night or Wedensday. Anyway, here's what I've done:

1) Better descriptions of places.

2) Decided to name Sairo's captial Taisei. Konan's capital, Eiyo, means
Honor, so I thought I'd try something like that for Sairo and came up
with "Tranquil Justice."

3) Kagatsu and Eki have added elements to their personalities visible
from the start. Both will, hopefully, become more developed during
episode 2 than they were before.

4) Have a page up detailing everything I have on the Byakko Seishi. You
can visit it at:
http://members.xoom.com/Souldrake/Fushigi/index.htm, then click on info,
and Byakko. Or if you're too lazy to do that you can get to it without
frames, here: http://members.xoom.com/Souldrake/Fushigi/ByakkoInfo.htm

I anticipate each rewritten episode to take me about 2-3 weeks, I also
have finals coming up, so things will be slow during that time. Thanks
for your support so far, and I hope you continue to read.

SoulDrake


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"May the journey through the darkness give you comfort
 in the presence of the everlasting light"

     -The Mighty SoulDrake