allyn yonge <ayonge@yahoo.com> wrote:

##Brush??? Again a personal preference, however I find the use of
names like Brush to be VERY distracting. The following URL's might be

I agree. If you're going to use names like this, Pinyinize them so that
they at least sound Chinese. "Brush" could be done as "Be Rishi" or "Be
Lushi."

As for this story, it's a pretty nicely written character sketch thingy,
but too short to give one an idea of what's going on. Good work, but
would be better as part of something larger and more substantial, which
I hope will be coming up.