Biggest suggestion I can make here is to slow down the plot a little to
allow for more reactions from the characters. How do Ranma and Akane
feel about all of this? Akane might be torn between her conscience
telling her not to take advantage of Ranma, and her desire to wish for
all of the things she wants.

Good luck with this story... This is gonna be a hard one to write
without backing yourself into a corner. Either Akane is going to make
some wishes to solve their problems (for Ranma and his curse form to be
split; for Ukyo, Shampoo, and Kodachi to stop chasing Ranma and be
happily married to other men; etc.) or someone else is gonna take the
ring and screw things up irreparibly.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics