Gary Kleppe wrote:

Biggest suggestion I can make here is to slow down the plot a little to
allow for more reactions from the characters.

Yeah, I noticed that.  I'm going back over it right now and spreading it
out a bit.

How do Ranma and Akane
feel about all of this?

very uneasy.  This going to force them to grow up a bit faster.

Akane might be torn between her conscience
telling her not to take advantage of Ranma, and her desire to wish for
all of the things she wants.

Not to mention keeping it secret as well as her feelings for Ranma.

Good luck with this story... This is gonna be a hard one to write
without backing yourself into a corner. Either Akane is going to make
some wishes to solve their problems (for Ranma and his curse form to be
split; for Ukyo, Shampoo, and Kodachi to stop chasing Ranma and be

No.  Ranma's magic cannot affect his cursed form.  He's stuck like he is.

happily married to other men; etc.) or someone else is gonna take the
ring and screw things up irreparibly.

I know.   What fun. Wheeee.  Ranma's condition is going to be used in other
ways than just wishes.  Oh well, this is early in the anime.


[OT] Appaerently, I'm going to have to use my Hotmail account, since my
ISPs don't like this ML.  To them any ML that mails to over 100 is
considered  delivery of spam.

My Hotmail e-mail account is  godphoniex@hotmail.com and I am using my
name, Tom Mathews, instead of Disruptor.