"WHAT IS C&C?"
FFML FAQ Supplement
Last revised 2/28/99

Original writer: Gary Kleppe <kleppe@execpc.com>
Current maintainers: Gary Kleppe <kleppe@execpc.com>, The Eternal Lost
Lurker <lurkerdrome@worldnet.att.net>, Warr <warr@pobox.alaska.net>



WELCOME TO THE FFML FAQ SUPPLEMENT ON C&C

Comments and criticisms, or C&C, is the most vital and essential
function of the fanfiction mailing list. This document hopes to
encourage more C&C on the list by discussing how and why C&C is done.
Any feedback on this document is welcomed; please contact the
maintainers at the addresses listed above.



WHAT IS C&C?

C&C stands for comments and criticisms. It means feedback provided to
authors of posted fanfics by readers, hopefully with the goal of
improving the fic.

WHO SHOULD C&C?

You should. Yes, you.

Why? Well, if you're an author, you almost certainly want C&C on the
stories that you post. It's only fair that you give the same back to
others. If you're not an author but just a reader, the obligation is not
as strong, but you still enjoy the privilege of being on the list and
therefore seeing fics before they are released to the general public.

In general, you should C&C because it makes the list a better place for
authors to send their fics. Authors send their fics to the list because
they expect C&C. If they get none, they'll look for another venue.

WHAT IF I HAVE NOTHING WORTHWHILE TO CONTRIBUTE?

There's always something worthwhile to contribute. Study the section on
types of C&C below.

BTW, C&C is a skill -- it improves with practice. The more you attempt
it, the better you'll be at it.

AS AN AUTHOR, HOW DOES IT BENEFIT ME TO C&C OTHER AUTHORS?

For one thing, the authors you C&C will be more likely to give you
feedback on your own stories. But more importantly, doing it will make
you a better critic, and that will help you notice things about your own
stories that you otherwise wouldn't have.

WHICH FICS ARE WORTHY OF C&C?

All of them.

OKAY, BUT WHICH FICS SHOULD *I* C&C?

This is pretty much up to you. One rule of thumb is that if a fic is in
a genre that you know you don't like (i.e. it's tagged as a [Darkfic]
and you hate darkfics), you should probably leave it alone unless
there's nothing else you can find.

WHAT DOES IT MEAN FOR C&C TO BE "CONSTRUCTIVE?"

It means that the criticisms given are aimed at improving the fic. They
suggest fixes for problems encountered, or at least are specific enough
to allow the author to identify and rectify the problems. "This fic
sucked" would be non-constructive.

SHOULD C&C ALWAYS BE CONSTRUCTIVE?

Ideally, yes. But whether it *can* always be is another question. As a
C&Cer, you are only human, and you might find yourself in a situation
where you have nothing helpful to say about a particular fic.

WHAT IS A MSTING?

MST stands for Mystery Science Theater 3000, a cable TV show 
featuring a man and two wisecracking robots. They are forced to watch 
bad movies, and they make clever commentary on them as they go.

Fanfiction MSTs are based on the format of that show. In a fanfiction 
MST, several characters (one of whom is usually the actual author of 
the MST) read a fic and make running commentary.

It's important to note that an MSTing doesn't necessarily indicate a 
bad fic. While it's true that some authors do MSTs to make fun of 
stories that they didn't like, others do them for stories that they 
did like in order to give them more exposure. Not all MSTs are C&C,
either; some of them are just done for their humor value.

DO I NEED TO DO MSTINGS OR SOME OTHER CLEVER FORMAT?

You don't *need* to, no. Attention-getting presentations are certainly
welcome if you wish to do them. They should not, however, be used to
cover up a lack of substance -- for example, an MSTing with a lot of
goofing around that says nothing about the fic.

DO I NEED THE AUTHOR'S PERMISSION TO POST C&C ON HIS/HER STORY?

In general, no. If an author asks for private comments only, you should
get permission before posting any C&C to the list. Many people feel that
it is good manners to ask permission before doing an MSTing of someone's
story, but others disagree.

HOW MUCH OF THE STORY SHOULD I QUOTE IN MY C&C?

You should quote however much (if any) of the story is necessary or
helpful for readers to understand what you are referring to in your C&C.
Sections that you have no comment on should be snipped. Do NOT repost
an entire fic or section merely to add a line or two of commentary.

SHOULD MY C&C BE PUBLIC OR PRIVATE?

Public C&C is that sent to the list. Private C&C is E-mailed directly to
the author, and only to the author. There is a whole range of opinions
as to which is better. (The author of this FAQ has a strong bias toward
the public, but will try to treat the matter fairly.)

Public C&C has a snowball effect; readers can comment on other readers'
comments, and you can end up with a richer discussion. It may end up
reducing spam on the list by getting people to talk about the fic
rather than irrelevant things. (Of course, the opposite is possible --
public C&C discussions can veer off topic and become huge spam
discussions.) You can get an idea of whether people agree or disagree
with your comments, and if you make a mistake, it's likely that someone
will correct you. Public C&C can be used to deliver general tips on
writing that others will find useful. Also, it can sometimes eliminate
duplication of effort -- if someone sees that you've spotted a typo,
they'll know that they don't need to tell the author the same thing.

On the other hand, private C&C keeps the feedback in the hands of the
person who you know is most interested in it -- the author -- and
insures that no one who isn't interested has to see it. It eliminates
the chance that your remarks will balloon into a huge argument, and
allows you greater flexibility to include things that might be too
controversial, too personal, or just too chatty for the list.

Which of these you should do is something you need to decide on a
case-by-case basis. Some things to consider are:

* Does your C&C say something more substantial than just "I liked it?"
(Authors certainly like to hear this, but if it's all you have to say it
might be best sent privately.)

* Do you address general points that might be of interest to other
writers or readers?

* Could some people on the list be inflamed or offended by what you have
to say?

* Are you interested in seeing other people's reaction to your comments?

* Is the story a good one by an obscure or unpopular author? Do you
think a public C&C would call attention to it?

* Does the author have a stated preference?

* Are you doing nothing more than agreeing with something that another
commentator has already said?

None of these criteria are absolute, unless you want them to be. They
are merely things to consider. The only absolutes are that if you must
flame, do it privately, and if the author requests private C&C only, you
should respect that.

WHAT DIFFERENT TYPES OF C&C ARE THERE?

It's possible to divide C&C into some broad categories -- though there
are probably examples that don't fit into any of them.

* Your reaction to the fic. This is the simplest kind of C&C, and one
that anyone can do. When you read the story, how did you experience it?
Did it make you laugh? Did it make you cry? Did it make you yawn and
wonder what its point was supposed to be?

Being specific helps. It's okay to get a response that says "I liked the
story," but it's better to get one saying "The scene with the cream pies
had me rolling on the floor laughing."

* Factual information. This includes both real-world facts, and
anime/manga series canon, that you think the writer might want to
correct or include in the story. Remember that writers are not obligated
to follow either the real world or the series that their fic is based
on. If a writer makes it clear that he/she is deliberately taking
license, you should probably ignore the point.

* Comments on the story itself. Is the idea sufficiently fresh -- or at
least handled in a fresh enough way -- to allow interest? Are the
conflicts in the story clear? Does the plot develop comfortably, taking
time to visit interesting story aspects and subplots, but not bogging
down or losing its focus? Is the ending properly climactic, and does it
offer a sufficiently satisfying resolution of the primary conflict?

What about the handling of the characters? For series characters, is the
treatment consistent with the major aspects of the characters that we
know from the manga/anime? If the character is changed, do the changes
make the character more interesting rather than less? For new
characters, are they believable and sufficiently developed? Do they fit
into the manga/anime milieu?

* Comments on the way the story is written. Are there errors in grammar,
spelling, punctuation, etc? Are there places where the dialog sounds
wooden, or forced, or unbelievable for the particular character? Are any
scenes paced so slowly that they drag -- or so quickly that the impact
they should have isn't there?

What about exposition? Is too little explained, making the story
confusing? Or is too much exposition getting in the way of the action?
Is information presented in a way that seems natural for the story?

For a prose story, is the choice of narrative person and perspective
appropriate and consistent? Are character thoughts revealed at
appropriate times and in appropriate amounts? Are there any awkward
phrasings, or any words or phrases that are repeated unnecessarily?

For a script, are the stage directions/descriptions detailed enough
without getting in the way of the story flow? Does the dialog beg to be
read out loud? Does the author remember to have all on-stage persons
mentioned before they have lines?

WHAT TYPE OF C&C SHOULD *I* DO?

Whatever kind you feel the story at hand calls for -- provided that you
feel qualified to give that kind of C&C. Obviously, you can't do grammar
corrections until you're skilled with English grammar.

WHAT SORTS OF DISCUSSIONS ARE *NOT* C&C?

As the cliche goes, all is not gold that glitters. Several types of
discussions might appear to be C&C, and are often tagged as C&C, but
aren't:

* Fic-inspired humor threads.

* Offshoot discussions that move away from the fic in question. For
example, the use of a gun in a story might lead to a thread on the
general topic of which weapons are more effective than others.

* Character debates. While talking about a story's treatment of a
character *is* C&C, a general discussion of that character's faults and
virtues isn't.

* Ideas for other fics.

This is not to say that the above shouldn't be posted. Whether they
should or not is a matter of list policy; consult the FAQ or the
moderators. But in any case, they aren't C&C.

WHAT IF THE AUTHOR OF THE FIC DECIDES NOT TO ACCEPT MY C&C?

There isn't much you can do; this is an author's prerogative. If you
feel that the author might not be understanding your point, you might
try to explain it in a different way. Don't repeat the same arguments
over again; if they didn't convince once, they won't the second time.
This is especially important for character issues, as there are a lot of
differing opinions out there and many people feel strongly that they are
right. If you've made your point and the author still fails to agree,
the best thing to do is to move on to the next fic.

AS A WRITER, HOW CAN I GET PEOPLE TO GIVE ME MORE C&C?

I recommend the following:

* Do more C&C yourself. Writers remember who gave them high-quality C&C,
and will be more inclined to return the favor when they have the chance.

* Don't spam the list a lot. The people who are most annoyed by spam are
the same ones who are most likely to give you good C&C.

* Format your fics properly when you post them. That means plain
ascii-only text, with a fixed 70-80 characters per line. Trying to read
sloppily-formatted posts is a headache that many readers won't put up
with -- and if you do get responses, the bulk of them will probably just
be complaints about your formatting. Also, if you have major problems
with grammar, spelling, etc., try to find a pre-reader who will correct
your stories before you post them. Make it a pleasure, rather than a
chore, for people to read your stories, and more people will read them.
*This is something that cannot be emphasized strongly enough.* Many a
good story has gone largely unread because its author didn't take the
time and effort to make it presentable.

* When you get C&C, reply to the C&Cer. Explain which of the C&Cer's
suggestions you'll be implementing, and why the others aren't right for
your fic. Even if you're not going to use any of the advice you were
given, your reply at least shows that you gave it serious consideration,
and that will make the person much more likely to spend time C&Cing your
future work.

Now, here are some strategies that I DON'T recommend:

* Writing shocking, controversial fics that people will notice.

* Choosing a particular manga/anime series to write in that you think
people will more likely comment on.

The first of these WILL get you more responses -- but probably not the
kind that you want. Mostly, you'll get people telling you that you're a
crazy, sick person; some of them will mean this in a good way, others
not. If all you're looking for is attention, fine. But this kind of
response probably won't help you improve your writing. Note that I'm NOT
saying that you shouldn't write this kind of fic -- only that the desire
for more C&C is a poor reason for doing it.

The second, well... you be the judge. Basing your stories on the better
known anime/manga series gives you a bigger pool of potential readers --
but it also means that more writers are competing against you for those
readers' attention. As far as I can tell, it pretty much evens out.
About all that can be said is that if you have a proven track record
writing fics based on one series, you'll probably have a bigger reader
base if you keep writing in that series, and a smaller one (at first) if
you branch out. In any case, my advice is to write in whatever series
you have good ideas for.

SHOULD I ADD [C&C] OR [Please C&C] TAGS WHEN I POST MY FIC?

No. [C&C] is a tag for posts that contain C&C on other fics, not a sign
that the author wants C&C. A [Please C&C] tag merely clutters the
subject line and states the obvious; it goes without saying that if
you're posting your fic to the FFML, you want C&C on it.

HOW DO I GET THE KIND OF C&C I WANT?

The best way is to ask for it. Specify in your author's notes what kind
you want, and more importantly any kinds that you DON'T want so that no
one wastes his or her time doing it for you.

WHEN SOMEONE SENDS ME C&C, AM I REQUIRED TO REPLY?

It's not a requirement; however, it greatly increases your chances of
being C&Cd again by the same reader. C&C takes time and effort, and a
C&Cer wants to know that it's not wasted. Whether you are a a newbie or
a household name on the FFML, you should reply to C&C. The C&Cer spent
his or her valuable time commenting on your story; if nothing else, the
least you can do is send a thank you note. This will let the commenter
know that you appreciate the time and effort involved, and you will be
more likely to receive followup comments as an added bonus.

AFTER I'VE GOTTEN C&C AND REVISED MY STORY, SHOULD I POST ANOTHER DRAFT?

Be judicious about reposting. Remember that people are less likely to
read and comment on something that they've seen before. Every reposting
decreases the number of responses you're likely to get. If it's been a
long time since the last posting and/or major changes have been made,
then it might be advisable to repost, but otherwise it isn't. Many
authors maintain teams of prereaders so that they can make a round of
revisions *before* their work goes out on the list.

HOW CAN I RESPOND TO C&C THAT I FEEL IS UNFAIR OR ABUSIVE?

First of all, DON'T give back the same. Dealing with your critics by
flaming, mailbombing, etc. is extremely unprofessional, to say the
least, and regardless of the provocation, other writers and C&Cers are
not going to look upon you favorably for doing it.

Some things you can do are:

* Give the person the brush-off. Simply respond with something like,
"Your opinions will be taken into consideration. Have a nice day!"

* Explain calmly and simply why the person's response isn't helpful to
you. "Thank you for your comments. At this point, I don't feel that I
can use your suggestion. This is an original flavor story, and for
Fiancee X to 'die a horrible flaming death' would make it too much like
a darkfic."

* Just ignore it. If you can't say anything without getting angry, it
might be best to say nothing at all. It won't make you feel any better,
but it won't make the situation worse either.