Ok, first of all thank you to everyone who responded. I was surprised I got
more than one as a matter of fact. One person said that Ranma being so
emotional didn't fit. I guess I implied it but I didn't mean too. What it is,
is that Ryouga just caught Ranma at a time when he had just been overwhelmed.
So, to fix this I'll add a little in explaining why Ranma is crying so much.
Next, I never thought about it but again someone pointed it out that Ranma and
Ryouga being together would need to be explained beyond just Alternate
Universe so after I finish revising this first chapter I plan to right a
prologue. Or maybe the second chapter will be a flash back. Also, thanks for
pointing out that Ryouga's "*If only the world was more accepting of
homosexuality my life'd be perfect*" line sounds preachy. Looking back I agree
so that'll be fixed. And finally..

In a message dated 2/25/99 5:57:54 PM Pacific Standard Time, ninyan29@idt.net
writes:

Not of his own violation. He needed to be comforted right now and he didn't

 you mean volition.

Oops..Yes, I did.

Actually, one last thing, I did in fact read the koi fishing pole incident but
this idea's been floating around with me since before then. Expect the
revision, sometime soon. Say a day or so...

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