Subject: [FFML] [Announce][Ranma] The Taming of the Horse second draft
From: Vincent Seifert
Date: 2/25/1999, 9:35 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

In addition to my recent posting of TotH chapters 6b and 6.5 to the FFML,
I have revised the rest of the story from the first draft posted in
December.

Corrections and monor revisions have been applied to all chapters.  Kasumi
has been toned down a little, especially in chapter 3, and Ranma's libido
has been cranked up a bit.

The prologue has been expanded to clarify certain points.

Scenes have been added to chapters 7, 8, and 9.

Since the changes aren't major, I don't plan to repost all 536K of TotH to
the FFML unless people tell me I should.  It's all webbable at

http://www.csus.edu/indiv/s/seifertv/toth/index.htm

for your reading convenience, should you wish to determine what a terrible
botch I've made of it.  ;)

Thanks to everyone whose suggestions and comments made Taming larger and
(hopefully) better!

Vince Seifert    Network Analyst     seifertv@csus.edu
http://webpages.csus.edu/~seifertv/  updated 1998Jun04
CSUS hired me to build their network, not to speak for the university.