Subject: Re: [FFML] Yea! She responded! Captain America 2 is started!
From: kleppe@execpc.com (Gary Kleppe)
Date: 2/18/1999, 6:13 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com
CC: "Jessica Samolson" <genius_20@HOTMAIL.COM>

HARIJUBAL@aol.com wrote:

Akane using ki to make the mallet . . . well, that's one explanation.  Of

Not one that makes a whole lot of sense, IMO... a lot of other
characters use mallets, including some with no martial arts training at
all.

The biggest problem I have with this story (other than the ultra-bland
characterizations) is that there's very little conflict. About the only
hint of it is at the end where it's hinted that Soun might not want
Akane joining the team -- and I doubt that's going to be enough to carry
the story. We desperately need a super-villain or someone to come in and
start actively plotting against our heroes.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics