Well, as I use a LOT of italics for thoughts and partially as a literary
device (But I still need to improve on that.  It's just used to define
thoughts by the characters so far.) I decided not to post it into a .txt
document.  Instead, it can be found in both Word 97 and Wordpad format
on my very cheaply thrown together site =P.

http://www.geocities.com/TimesSquare/Bunker/3244/index.html

C&C is welcome and appreciated as I have almost zero outside input so
far.  Even my pre readers are limited to a vocabulary of "It's good" or
they want to destroy my plot =P.  Anyway, enough rambling for a first
post.  Oh yeah, the story uses characters from GunSmith Cats.  If you
are familiar with them, that's fine, although it seems a little too
serious for them.  If not, it doesn't really matter much as they are
revealed to you in the writing somewhat.

Asha`man

Yeah, I'm a Robert Jordan addict just like what seems like the rest of
the people here =).