Here is a short, little fanfic written by my short, little sister. 
Go easy on her though, she's only 11.

  Very well, I won't go into my textual rants. 

			   Goodbye

My name is Stephiroth. This is my first fanfic and I really don't 
know what else to put here so I'll just start.

  A play on Seph? Never mind. 

Shampoo had left in tears, but not before trying to kill Akane.
Cologne left with Shampoo, but not before trying to kill Ranma.
Mousse left following Shampoo.

  ...but not before trying to kill Ranma for making Shampoo cry. 
  Never mind. 

Kuno had left in search of his pig-tailed goddess. He did not come 

back. 

  This I have a problem with. Why would Kuno leave knowing that the girl 
of his dreams is in Nerima (of course, this is assuming that Ranma's 
been going around in his girl form every once in a while-- knowing 
Ranma, that happens quite often)? 

Kodachi was committed to an asylum. She did not come out.

  Must... resist... aaaaaaaahhhhh.... 

Ryouga had left to wander the world. He did not come back.
Ukyou had disappeared. As soon as she heard that Ranma and Akane
had gotten married, she closed down her restaurant, gathered her 
possessions and left without a word.

Some people were worried about her. They hadn't expected her to leave.
They had expected her to still be Ranma's best friend.

  It might help to note which people were worried about her. Then again, 
that might include all of her regular customers. Some people might 
actually be happy she left, too. 

He sighed again, this time in a different manner.

Why did she leave? 
I thought you were my best friend, Ukyou. 

  Heh, it's just like Ranma to think that. Especially since it's one of 
the biggest paradoxes Ranma ever created-- he treats Ukyo like dirt more 
often than as a friend. 

Ranma thought of home. Akane did not accompany him to the springs. He
did not want her to come. Ranma told her it would be too dangerous if 
she came with him. He did not want Akane to be cursed.

  It's just like him to think that. Especially since every other person 
that went there came back with a curse, too. 

"Hello, er, where is the spring of drowned man?" Ranma asked.

The guide looked at him strangely.

"No spring of drowned man here, sir, sorry."

  Gaaah? 

"Ukyou?!" 

  Here's what I'm wondering: what is she doing there? 

Ukyou turned around.
Unfortunately, Ranma was not greeted very warmly by her.
Ukyou's eyes narrowed in anger as she saw him. 
Ranma was shocked to see Ukyou. She did not look the same as she did 
three years ago. Her eyes were red, very red. 

  Satanic Ukyo (TM)!! Run for your lives!! :)

Could my marriage to Akane stain her eyes for this long? Ranma thought.
Ukyou had also grown a lot thinner. Her figure looked fine three years
ago.

  Ukyo: "So you noticed me NOW?" 
  Couldn't resist. 

"Well, what are you looking at? What do you want?" Ukyou snapped.

  I'm tempted to mention the Vorlon question right now. 

"Ukyou, don't act mad," Ranma said. "I should be the one who's mad.
I've been worried sick about you for the last three years!"

Ukyou snorted, "I spent over twice that time worrying about you."

Ranma gulped. He had forgotten about that. His anger quickly drained
away.

  Hehehe, he's dead. 

"I...I'm sorry Ucchan," was all Ranma could sputter out.

"Don't call me Ucchan anymore, Ranma," Ukyou warned.

Ranma sighed. "Ukyou, what happened to you? You've changed."

"Time changes people Ranma, I think you should know that by now."

  Considering this is Ranma... no. 

"Ukyou, don't be like this, come back to Nerima with me. You had a good 
life there,"

  The naive side shows through here. 

Maybe that wasn't the best thing to say, because right now, Ukyou 

looked

very, very angry. 

That was when she totally lost it.

  Must... resist... becoming... Kodachi.... 

"Good life?!," Ukyou screamed."How can I have a good life seeing you 

and 

her together everyday! I worried about you, I waited for you, I Iooked
for you for years and what do I get? Nothing! But if you call a

  But your consolation prize is... never mind. 

stupid
pile of bricks something, then I guess that's what I got, but I don't 
think that's a lot after doing so much and getting so little in 

return!" 

"Well then, what should I do, Ukyou?" Ranma asked. "What do you want me
to do?"

  Jump in a lake! (then again, considering location, that might not be 
in Ranma's best interests, either)

Ukyou was slightly stunned by what Ranma said. She took a breath and 
looked at him, her expression a little softer than before.

"If you want to do anything that will help me, I suggest you leave me
alone. I have too many painful memories as it is. I don't want more."

Ranma did not leave.

  It takes losing something to notice it missing, I suppose. 

Hey, I wrote a fanfic, cool. C&C welcome but go easy on me, I'm only 
11 years old. This fic took me under an hour. I wrote it because I felt 
the urge for Ukyou to finally tell Ranma she had suffered. 

  Let me tell you a little secret: some of my best fics were done in 
under an hour, too. 
  This was good for a first, but there's one thing that puzzled me: why 
the trip to the springs if it served no actual purpose? And why was Ukyo 
there in the first place? (Fine, so I lied; it was two things.) 

"Decepticons FOREVER!!" --Ravage, former Decepticon
"You've gotten tricker since last time. I LIKE THAT!!"--Rampage
"If you go to Z'ha'dum, you will die." --Kosh, Babylon 5
"Master! You mustn't! People are watching!!"--Cherry, Saber Marionette J

--Razorclaw X
Author: "Wheel of Fire" and "The World's Worst Ranma Fanfic!"

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